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Brief Moment

now you see it now you don't a brief moment snuffed and gone the candle flickered flame never glowed goodbye whispered as I moved on late at night, your dreams are spawned turning to lust before the dawn you clutch my pillow but I've withdrawn that side now cold my love long gone once you had it now you don't

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/27/2009 3:01:00 PM
An enjoyable read, JB. Very well said. andrea
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Date: 12/27/2009 11:12:00 AM
A very sad write, but beautiful in its reality and truthfulness as well. Sadness comes in closed chapters of life and love and too often, the pages we need to turn in order to move into the next chapters are so very heavy and require a great deal of effort and pain be endured first. Lovely write.
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