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"bridges Crossed"

No more toll booths to reach an empty place.. A bridge that can't be crossed with trust or haste.. Faith and truth ran away with little discretion... Darkness now covers the landscape of in decisions... Tall steel towers outline the pathway back to my haven... No more empty feeling as all unsaid words are put to saving... My mind clear and free to work only in love and peace... So here I write for eyes not known only shared and free...

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/24/2010 1:46:00 PM

We cross a lot of bridges in our lives, Michael. Some of them take us to good places and some take us to bad ones. Making decisions has always been hard for me so I try not to burn any bridges along the way. I'm glad your mind is "clear and free to work only in love and peace." Very nicely said, my friend. Love and blessings for a Happy Thanksgiving, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/24/2010 9:55:00 AM

Michael, I enjoyed the message in this write of yours.. The sun just went down over here after a nice sunny day.. Hope you are having a great day across the big swimming pool.. ;) Love Wilma

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/24/2010 5:54:00 AM

I love the way you write for eyes not know,lovely!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 6:11:00 PM

Know U can relate Michael .. to my Once Again ..because of losing your Dad and Sister.. so appreciate your loving comments tonight luv..J.G. forever and always..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 5:49:00 PM

Super Michael.. luve the analogy of the bridge and toll booths as we well know in Jersey ... wonderful descriptive flow in these lines of intensity .. how is it going my W.K. .. your Jersey Girl still wearing black for those boys in blue..luv..