Bridge To Oblivion

steadily walking
toward stars of swirling light
darkness all around
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Muzzey Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:28 PM
A wonderful Haiku, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 9:29 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Brandee. Love, Carol
Parker Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Nice contrast between the light and darkness! The gilded sky is a beacon to march forward into the dark night. Good luck in Rick's contest!
A   Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 1:56 PM
Hi Bran, how are you? I like the steady walk of cross over.. so xool.. and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
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