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Bridge To Fealty

Bartered memories with lust twined Truant souls that could never bind Carnal fancies solemnly pined Exchanged for fealty and left behind Hopes sacrificed; dreams resigned Narcissistic bridges burned; amorous harbors mined Walking along life's highway blind Stumbled upon fertile path with opportunities lined Fateful suitor my longing footsteps divined Heart that was broken now realigned Faithful partner with noble intentions my will refined A succoring ally of the nurturing kind Now carnal treasures canker in the dark; steadying rays of love have shined

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2010 9:00:00 AM
Love, the answer to all our extremes is the best inspiration of poets. Glad she inspired you ... that first verse is amazing.
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Date: 12/22/2010 3:02:00 PM
I am very much impressed the way your words flow with perfect natural rhyming, Stephen
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Date: 12/22/2010 8:44:00 AM
Oh, how I love this poem! Especially the first four lines, but the whole poem is so good. And the way it written, with each line flowing into the next to tell the whole message, and what a message you tell. And the use of rhyme - this is not easy to do without becoming awkward at some point, but you have done it here. This is a favorite. Well done.
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Date: 12/22/2010 8:44:00 AM
ps. thanks for reading my poem 'Deep Within' and for your comments. I appreciate it.
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