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bridge of troubled waters

pale creek
pebbled stream
arrested pond
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Beautiful, emotive - life sounds stagnant
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:42 PM
A life that is not all black and white spirals downward, finding finality as its release. Thank you, Aloha.
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