Heidi Sands Poet Sijo

Bridge In the Sky

The rain poured from the sky, leaving puddles to rising rivers
  After hours of tapping on roof tops, the sun began to shine
  As a colorful rainbow emerged, building a bridge to dreams

Heidi Sands

2/9/21

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Sara Kendrick February 23, 2021 at 2:26 PM I haven't seen a rainbow but the sunshine was almost as great. I am appreciating the sun. Your presence at my page was delightful. Sara Heidi Sands February 24, 2021 at 10:53 AM Oh, I hope that you will see a rainbow sometime! I saw a beautiful one once that went right into the top of a mountain and got a photo of that. I appreciate the sunshine earlier today here too with warmer temps. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Alexis Y. February 15, 2021 at 10:40 AM WoW! Heidi, This is filled with lovely imagery. A delightful message as well. I love rainbows. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis Heidi Sands February 16, 2021 at 12:02 PM Thank you very much Alexis. I hope you have a great day too :)

Akkina Downing February 13, 2021 at 6:56 PM Oh this is very lovely, Heidi. I love it! Heidi Sands February 14, 2021 at 6:11 AM Thank you Akkina. I am happy you love this :) I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)

Rama Balasubramanian February 11, 2021 at 6:57 AM This is such a lovely way to describe rainbow. Bridge to dreams. Great imagery. I could feel the rain, sun and rainbow. Take care Rama Heidi Sands February 11, 2021 at 7:56 AM Thank you very much Rama. I appreciate your kind comment. I am happy to hear that :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2021 at 2:43 AM - Lovely written, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands February 11, 2021 at 6:07 AM Thank you Anne-Lise Hugs :)

Harry Horsman February 10, 2021 at 6:48 PM And the pot of gold at the end of it. Beautiful Sijo Heidi, love the poem and the form. Heidi Sands February 11, 2021 at 6:07 AM Thank you for your nice comment Harry. I hope you have a nice day :)

Quoth Theraven February 9, 2021 at 7:50 PM Hello Heidi, The wells run deep and clear from the rainfall in this poem. -Richard Heidi Sands February 10, 2021 at 5:43 AM Thank you Richard. I appreciate your comment :)

Kim Rodrigues February 9, 2021 at 6:45 PM Pretty, Heidi! Heidi Sands February 10, 2021 at 5:42 AM Thank you Kim :)

Mystic Rose Rose February 9, 2021 at 5:47 PM Love rainbows Heidi, nicely penned. Thank you for sharing. Heidi Sands February 10, 2021 at 5:42 AM Thank you Mystic Rose and you are welcome :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 9, 2021 at 3:49 PM Hello Heidi, this beautifully done. Enjoy your evening my friend. I love rainbows. Hugs Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu February 10, 2021 at 12:59 PM Hello Heidi, I love the rainbow it is so pretty. I did. Enjoy your day . Hugs Darlene. Heidi Sands February 9, 2021 at 4:40 PM Thank you Darlene. Rainbows are beautiful to see. I hope you have a nice evening. Hugs :)

Jan Allison February 9, 2021 at 2:56 PM lovely imagery the final line is charming heidi:-) hugs jan xx Heidi Sands February 9, 2021 at 4:39 PM Thank you Jan. I am happy you like this. I appreciate the feedback :)