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Bridge In the Sky

The rain poured from the sky, leaving puddles to rising rivers After hours of tapping on roof tops, the sun began to shine As a colorful rainbow emerged, building a bridge to dreams Heidi Sands 2/9/21

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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/24/2021 10:06:00 PM
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I think this is beautiful, the last line speaks of hope.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/25/2021 6:07:00 AM
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I am happy you see it that way Sandy. Thank you very much :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2021 2:26:00 PM
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I haven't seen a rainbow but the sunshine was almost as great. I am appreciating the sun. Your presence at my page was delightful. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2021 10:53:00 AM
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Oh, I hope that you will see a rainbow sometime! I saw a beautiful one once that went right into the top of a mountain and got a photo of that. I appreciate the sunshine earlier today here too with warmer temps. Thank you for your kind comment :)
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Alexis Y.
Date: 2/15/2021 10:40:00 AM
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WoW! Heidi, This is filled with lovely imagery. A delightful message as well. I love rainbows. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/16/2021 12:02:00 PM
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Thank you very much Alexis. I hope you have a great day too :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/13/2021 6:56:00 PM
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Oh this is very lovely, Heidi. I love it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/14/2021 6:11:00 AM
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Thank you Akkina. I am happy you love this :) I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/11/2021 6:57:00 AM
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This is such a lovely way to describe rainbow. Bridge to dreams. Great imagery. I could feel the rain, sun and rainbow. Take care Rama
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2021 7:56:00 AM
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Thank you very much Rama. I appreciate your kind comment. I am happy to hear that :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/11/2021 2:43:00 AM
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- Lovely written, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2021 6:07:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise Hugs :)
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Harry Horsman
Date: 2/10/2021 6:48:00 PM
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And the pot of gold at the end of it. Beautiful Sijo Heidi, love the poem and the form.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2021 6:07:00 AM
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Thank you for your nice comment Harry. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 2/9/2021 7:50:00 PM
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Hello Heidi, The wells run deep and clear from the rainfall in this poem. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2021 5:43:00 AM
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Thank you Richard. I appreciate your comment :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2021 6:45:00 PM
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Pretty, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2021 5:42:00 AM
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Thank you Kim :)
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/9/2021 5:47:00 PM
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Love rainbows Heidi, nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2021 5:42:00 AM
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Thank you Mystic Rose and you are welcome :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 3:49:00 PM
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Hello Heidi, this beautifully done. Enjoy your evening my friend. I love rainbows. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/10/2021 12:59:00 PM
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Hello Heidi, I love the rainbow it is so pretty. I did. Enjoy your day . Hugs Darlene.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/9/2021 4:40:00 PM
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Thank you Darlene. Rainbows are beautiful to see. I hope you have a nice evening. Hugs :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/9/2021 2:56:00 PM
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lovely imagery the final line is charming heidi:-) hugs jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/9/2021 4:39:00 PM
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Thank you Jan. I am happy you like this. I appreciate the feedback :)

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