Mohan Chutani Poet Senryu

Bridge Generation

we heard our parents  
were afraid to deviate;
lost out own dreams fast.

Young ones of today
Grow up in virtual world;
our influence wanes.

we had listened then
we even tolerate now;
we a bridge age group. 

happy that our young
fly on the wings of their dreams;
compensate for ours.

8.4.2015

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:08 PM Mohan, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA

Paul Callus April 12, 2015 at 11:56 AM Clever string of senryu, Mohan; final one makes for a great conclusion. Congrats on your win! // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2015 at 10:14 PM yes, some parents sure do live their dreams thru the kids, sometimes at the kids' detriment. Congrats on your win!

Judy Konos April 11, 2015 at 11:55 AM Storytelling Senryu....Thanks for entering my contest....

Jan Allison April 11, 2015 at 10:09 AM lovely string of poems congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2015 at 2:53 AM - Much truth in your words - Well written, Mohan - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)