Bride Goes To Plan B

Prior to ceremony Lily’s future mother-in-law insisted on things her way
She introduced a prenup, and spoiled the bride’s entire wedding day
The groom acted embarrassed, but he lived in his parents’ house
So, he kept his mouth shut, did not even make the peep of a mouse

The future mother-in-law let the bride-to-be know how things would be.
Lily heard the rules of the house, housework would be done on her knee.
Bride watched interaction between her groom and the overbearing mother.
She ran off before the wedding, knowing she could do better with another.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/10/2023 6:02:00 AM
Better with another or on her own. How could she have even considered marrying a man who was married to his mother? lol Caren. A fun read.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/10/2023 8:46:00 AM
She did not know until they were getting closer to commitment time.
Date: 1/9/2023 7:17:00 PM
Lily will find a better pad. That's for sure! Wise words, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/9/2023 7:54:00 PM
Run Lily run!
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