Brick Whack In Dark Night

Brick Whack in Dark Night 

I woke up from my sleep with sudden shot,
And instantly forgot my dreams to tell,
Unconsciously my hand reached out for cell
It knew where I had put it, ere I fell
Into that June night sleep, too, too much hot
To fall asleep. However, it could not
Take hold of it. Quite desperate I got
Up in my bed, and searched for hand fan. Well!
I could not get it either. Oh, what Hell!

I simply sat down at the edge of cot
And felt the sweat-drops trickling at my back,
And looked around in echoing dark, dark lot.
It was quite dark and silent night. I think
I had not seen more silent, darker night
With gasp of silence all around up right
I tried to find some fissure, crevice, chink
Of outside light but could not. O alack!
I could not get the reason of that whack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 16, 2016 at 11:23 PM
basit ali, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 14, 2016 at 10:59 PM
BASIT, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 9:18 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Basit. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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July 2, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site ..check out our free contests too.. interesting write.. share words with luv ...
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