Brenda Chiri Oi

Last time we spoke you’d been in a car crash 
And the time before that you’d been in a car crash 
So it’s a fair bet the silence is from a car crash
Repetitive rhyming mate it’s like a car crash 
and you should know mate being the queen of car crash

Like an alarm harassing the ear drum til you arose
come back to life showing signs you're comatose, 
I’m coming over the pond to break you out of this mong, 
you been gone so long like my shlong, 
did you crash again moron,
stupid place to put a pylon
right in your path like that

this talk ain’t cheap it’s free 
we got fibres buzzing between you and me 
from text talk to poetry 
is it sexting you're fearing 
and that’s why you’re disappearing, 
how can I dis you when I don’t hear you, 
look I miss you come back I’ll cheer you
don't be a tongue tied Chiri try me on the fibre wireless 4g 5g 6g
the EE technology flying free over the sea from you to me so we see
Chiri reply to me you fake G

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/22/2023 11:09:00 AM
Lmao! Just going through your pieces ancc so remembering :)
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Date: 7/2/2019 12:11:00 PM
Lmao! Ahhh nick I would never ignore you silly muppet! How could I ever lmao! Nick oh nick I hear ya! But men are so demanding lol! Attention love is that what you need? Hahaha! See muppetnow I might just have to send one to you! Great write lol!;)
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