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Breeze of Loneliness

Sitting alone in a quite park, Feeling blue for the day turns dark, It’s like my life becomes black and white, Eyes looks weary it’s not as alive and bright. Hearing the sounds of birds, Flying softly in the cloudy skies. Want to reach out and be with them, Free to explore and free from my pain. The cold breeze of air hit my skin. Because I’m wearing a shirt that is too thin, Freezing my body and my emotion, Loneliness in me resides with the biggest portion. A breeze ruffled the leaves to ease my pain, Loneliness engulfs my being and who’s to blame? Pretending to be strong when my heart is broken. Where are you my love, is it really the end? January 15, 2013 3rd Place Winner For Frank's "Loneliness Contest"

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Date: 4/4/2015 9:33:00 PM
Maria, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:04:00 AM
what a great expression of loneliness and a touch of longing. always important to have since they go hand in hand. good luck in contest
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 4/2/2015 10:46:00 PM
thanks friend Nathan ;)
Date: 9/7/2014 10:15:00 AM
great write Maria, really so well penned, nice flow and rhyme, God bless, Gordon
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 1/13/2018 9:17:00 AM
thanks friend Gordon. Good day.
Date: 3/7/2014 12:02:00 AM
Hello Lovely Maria, a beautiful poem you paint. I'm glad you got a place in Frank's contest... He's got awesome taste..... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:48:00 PM
thanks Dear PD ;) Have a blessed Holy Week
Date: 2/28/2014 7:07:00 AM
A beautifully sad poem my dear friend. I love it so much and so enjoyed this evening. Sorry for being late & for almost missing to read this one. Super duper busy. Whew! Have to prepare again for next camp this wk. By the way, biggest congratulations on your win! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 2/26/2014 1:35:00 AM
I love how you captured the feeling of loneliness here. And I see you captured a high placement. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 2/24/2014 9:14:00 AM
Dear Maria, Loneliness well written! 7 my best, chuck
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Date: 2/24/2014 7:16:00 AM
i was drowned with the loneliness your poem does portait...Maria..this so heart felt!!! .. :'(( ..thank you for the visit as well! ..^__^ ...SMILE!! :0)
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Date: 2/24/2014 7:08:00 AM
Maria the twist at the end was unexpected and sad because the poem has some very good images, I like it....David
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Date: 2/24/2014 5:52:00 AM
awhh, a pleasure to read this again, paz.. full of longing, full of mellow artwords so defining.. hope bkk is more sober now.. huggs
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Date: 1/24/2014 2:31:00 PM
love the end line; how deep, paz... cheers on your fine win!
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:18:00 PM
Enjoyed the write on loneliness and congrats on the fine win, Maria
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Date: 1/22/2014 1:26:00 PM
A touching and beautiful poem Maria - Happiness is great when you have one to share your life with - Everyone needs love .... all searching for love. - A really well written poem, greatly appreciate this poem, dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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