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Breeze From the Streets

On the streets where striplings beseech Sweet benign breeze swept my tears dry For some nibbles, they beg and preach While some granaries choked and sigh. Submitted on February 04, 2020, for Arbitrium Divisa 7 Poetry Contest sponsored by Gregory R Barden Taken from my poem "Flooding Tears" submitted on January 19, 2020

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Date: 2/4/2020 3:40:00 PM
The contrast is heartbreaking, isn't it? I n the USA farmers are paid not to grow crops some years. Shed real tears! ~ Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/4/2020 10:36:00 PM
Yes.. Some realities hard to swallow.. Thank you for your input..
Date: 2/4/2020 6:50:00 AM
That photo evokes such sadness! Great story in your stanza--best for a win, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/4/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your kind words and support..
Date: 2/4/2020 4:12:00 AM
Captivating rhyme: Powerful, emotional, moving! Excellent work dearest, Jenish! Good luck my friend, Hugs xxx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/4/2020 4:32:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your continuing support.. Have a nice day!!

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