Breeze

it echoes in the mountains
whispers in a breeze
ruffling my hair
but not stirring the trees
cool breath upon hot skin
my heart is now set free
the wonder of your love
and all you give to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Great rhyme. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Echo Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 7:52 AM
I love your poems! They are great... you add nice details and they are easy to read. :) -Echo
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