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Breeze

it echoes in the mountains whispers in a breeze ruffling my hair but not stirring the trees cool breath upon hot skin my heart is now set free the wonder of your love and all you give to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/21/2010 8:31:00 AM
Great rhyme. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/21/2010 7:52:00 AM
I love your poems! They are great... you add nice details and they are easy to read. :) -Echo
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