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northerly breeze whips giant oak loses acorns .... loud pings disturb sleep

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Karen Croft

Date: 10/7/2024 8:34:00 PM

Enjoyed your haiku!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2024 4:09:00 AM

Why, thank you, Karen. I appreciate you reading it. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/25/2024 11:12:00 AM

You captured the moment. We will have a lot of the storming acorns landing on our roof soon!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2024 12:57:00 PM

Kim, So they say. I hope it is not that bad for your area. I am praying for no loss of live/s or injuries and no damage or destruction to property. Thanks for stopping by..Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/25/2024 10:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "breeze" Haiku write. What a pretty/peaceful path for a picture. Wish I was taking a walk..... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2024 12:55:00 PM

Paula, those walks especially if they are leisurely are so nice. I haven't been able to do that in a very long time. Thanks for dropping by with a nice review. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2024 8:21:00 PM

Your acorns across the pond must weight a whole lot more than ours do here in Chicago!! Losing sleep?!! Wow!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2024 7:29:00 AM

Why, thank you, Gershon for the nice review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara K