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Image result for pictures of old country scene with giant red oak in fall losing acorns

breeze

northerly breeze whips
giant oak loses acorns ....
loud pings disturb sleep

seasonshaiku

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Howard Kerr

September 1, 2026 at 10:28 PM

Picturesque piece, Sara, that draws the reader to the area being described. The words in this poem have energy and nuance.🔥🔥 Hk

Sara Kendrick

September 2, 2026 at 5:14 AM

Howard, your visit is a delight. I am delighted you saw this work as picturesque. Way to go. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Karen Croft

October 7, 2024 at 8:34 PM

Enjoyed your haiku!

Sara Kendrick

October 8, 2024 at 4:09 AM

Why, thank you, Karen. I appreciate you reading it. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

September 25, 2024 at 11:12 AM

You captured the moment. We will have a lot of the storming acorns landing on our roof soon!

Sara Kendrick

September 25, 2024 at 12:57 PM

Kim, So they say. I hope it is not that bad for your area. I am praying for no loss of live/s or injuries and no damage or destruction to property. Thanks for stopping by..Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

September 25, 2024 at 10:16 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "breeze" Haiku write. What a pretty/peaceful path for a picture. Wish I was taking a walk..... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Sara Kendrick

September 25, 2024 at 12:55 PM

Paula, those walks especially if they are leisurely are so nice. I haven't been able to do that in a very long time. Thanks for dropping by with a nice review. Sara K