Alexis Y. Poet Monoku

Breathtaking View

As I laid under the pale moonlight, I looked up;
 saw a shooting star.

It was breathtaking, but it doesn’t come close
to what I see in your eyes.
















Alexis Y.
07-20-2021

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Sara Kendrick July 26, 2021 at 4:07 PM Ahh!! How romantic. Good comparison writing in this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Gordon Mcconnell July 22, 2021 at 1:56 PM Romance at its best Alexis, truly breathtaking! Blessings, Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2021 at 11:02 AM - Romantic under the moon ... lovely written, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel July 22, 2021 at 1:28 AM That's so sweet, Alexis:)

Gershon Wolf July 21, 2021 at 6:30 PM So sweet, Alexis. Who needs a telescope?! :) gw

Sandra Adams July 21, 2021 at 5:25 PM this is beautiful... the closing lines tell it all... good write Alexis! hugs :)

Susan Ashley July 21, 2021 at 5:15 PM Indeed, Alexis! I absolutely adore how you set up your beautiful finale. Your romantic poem is both dreamy and breathtaking. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Chris Green July 21, 2021 at 5:56 AM Beautiful my friend.

Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 4:57 AM How sweet and delightful, Alexis! Into my FAVES.

Victor Buhagiar July 20, 2021 at 11:05 PM Great contrast, Alexis.