Iolanda Scripca Poet Haiku

Breathtaking Sunrise

Pacific murmur
Blond eyelids wake up seagulls
Happiness alive

Surf and rays in love
Paintbrushes escape from box
Immortality...

Tempera of Soul
Obsessive Golden Spectrum
Rip open my chest

Don' t need oxygen
Growing gills,  play with dolphins
Sun alive again...



***for P.D.'s Contest " Sunrise"***

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Matthew Anish December 9, 2011 at 9:54 PM Nice collection of haiku here. I especially like - "Surf and rays in love" - good personification. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carol Eastman December 8, 2011 at 7:37 AM Great visuals. Great write.

Matthew Anish November 25, 2011 at 12:38 PM Do you live on the West Coast? I haven't been out there in years. Sounds like a soul - fufilling experience. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2011 at 2:15 PM Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed reading...Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2011 at 11:59 PM these are really cool. Congratulations. I sure have enjoyed the winners of this contest!!

John Freeman November 18, 2011 at 6:43 PM Congrats Iolanda on your breathtaking sunrise. How have you been lady? Agape, Moses

John Loving Iii November 18, 2011 at 5:51 PM congradulations in the contest. john

Carol Sunshine Brown November 18, 2011 at 10:57 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley November 18, 2011 at 8:43 AM Very nicely written Iolanda. Congratulations

Broken Butterfly November 18, 2011 at 8:42 AM Congratulations Iolanda on your placement with these great Haiku's. And thank you for reading my poetry. You ask why I have broken wings? A long story and a long journey. I am trying to write of it in my poetry.

Poet Destroyer A November 18, 2011 at 2:27 AM IOLANDA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Skat A November 16, 2011 at 2:26 AM beautiful..Skat