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Breathtaking Sunrise

Pacific murmur Blond eyelids wake up seagulls Happiness alive Surf and rays in love Paintbrushes escape from box Immortality... Tempera of Soul Obsessive Golden Spectrum Rip open my chest Don' t need oxygen Growing gills, play with dolphins Sun alive again... ***for P.D.'s Contest " Sunrise"***

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Date: 12/9/2011 9:54:00 PM
Nice collection of haiku here. I especially like - "Surf and rays in love" - good personification. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/8/2011 7:37:00 AM
Great visuals. Great write.
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Date: 11/25/2011 12:38:00 PM
Do you live on the West Coast? I haven't been out there in years. Sounds like a soul - fufilling experience. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/20/2011 2:15:00 PM
Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed reading...Sara
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:59:00 PM
these are really cool. Congratulations. I sure have enjoyed the winners of this contest!!
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Date: 11/18/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congrats Iolanda on your breathtaking sunrise. How have you been lady? Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/18/2011 5:51:00 PM
congradulations in the contest. john
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Date: 11/18/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:43:00 AM
Very nicely written Iolanda. Congratulations
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your placement with these great Haiku's. And thank you for reading my poetry. You ask why I have broken wings? A long story and a long journey. I am trying to write of it in my poetry.
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:27:00 AM
IOLANDA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:26:00 AM
beautiful..Skat
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