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Breathtaking

Bring me excitement the fun of the fair Roaring with laughter at the fun house's mirror covered walls Excitement at riding the merry go round Acrobats juggling, you just cant help put stop and stare Tombola prizes tucked under arms Hotdogs with onions, and mustard stained cloths Tickets to ride and memory's galore All of the laughter and music combines Kandy floss moustache's on pretty girls smiles Illuminated stalls with there flashing neon signs Nothing compares to a night at the fair Great for your soul and it leaves you breathless for more. comp entry 0903/2016

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 3/21/2016 7:22:00 AM

Sweet acrostic Stephen.

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/21/2016 9:04:00 AM

cheers : tried to go with a theme to match the word

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/10/2016 3:09:00 AM

Your acrostic moves very smoothly from line to line Stephen, just what John asked for. It was a fun read. I hope this does well. ; )

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/10/2016 3:55:00 AM

thank you very much 2nd go ever read a couple from the last comp to see how to do it . very tempting to use a list but john warned against it thanks again

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 3/9/2016 7:14:00 AM

Brought back memories of county fairs...the amusements, the smells, the people. Vividly penned, thank you for taking me back.

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/9/2016 7:45:00 AM

thanks for taking time to read the poem cheers

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/9/2016 7:41:00 AM

just googled funnel cakes look good Im getting some good cooking tips with silent ones green comp I was told about green eggs and ham which I dined on at the week end funnel cakes next maybe

Robert Heemstra

Date: 3/9/2016 6:44:00 AM

Nothing like a fair! Funnel cakes, plenty of games and yes plenty more to eat! Thanks for the read!

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/9/2016 7:45:00 AM

just googled funnel cakes look good Im getting some good cooking tips with silent ones green comp I was told about green eggs and ham which I dined on at the week end funnel cakes next maybe