Stephen Pennell Poet Acrostic

Breathtaking

Bring me excitement the fun of the fair
Roaring with laughter at the fun house's mirror covered walls  
Excitement at riding the merry go round
Acrobats juggling, you just cant help put stop and stare
Tombola prizes tucked under arms  
Hotdogs with onions, and mustard stained cloths 
Tickets to ride and memory's galore
All of the laughter and  music combines
Kandy floss moustache's on pretty girls smiles
Illuminated stalls with there flashing neon signs
Nothing compares to a night at the fair 
Great for your soul and it leaves you breathless for more. 





comp entry 0903/2016

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Lenny Gazbowski March 21, 2016 at 7:22 AM Sweet acrostic Stephen. Stephen Pennell March 21, 2016 at 9:04 AM cheers : tried to go with a theme to match the word

Connie Marcum Wong March 10, 2016 at 3:09 AM Your acrostic moves very smoothly from line to line Stephen, just what John asked for. It was a fun read. I hope this does well. ; ) Stephen Pennell March 10, 2016 at 3:55 AM thank you very much 2nd go ever read a couple from the last comp to see how to do it . very tempting to use a list but john warned against it thanks again

Dineen Williams Gault March 9, 2016 at 7:14 AM Brought back memories of county fairs...the amusements, the smells, the people. Vividly penned, thank you for taking me back. Stephen Pennell March 9, 2016 at 7:45 AM thanks for taking time to read the poem cheers Stephen Pennell March 9, 2016 at 7:41 AM just googled funnel cakes look good Im getting some good cooking tips with silent ones green comp I was told about green eggs and ham which I dined on at the week end funnel cakes next maybe

Robert Heemstra March 9, 2016 at 6:44 AM Nothing like a fair! Funnel cakes, plenty of games and yes plenty more to eat! Thanks for the read! Stephen Pennell March 9, 2016 at 7:45 AM just googled funnel cakes look good Im getting some good cooking tips with silent ones green comp I was told about green eggs and ham which I dined on at the week end funnel cakes next maybe