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Breathtaking

Breathtaking Kiara Lebel Increasing heart rates start Thoughts of long lasting life are wishes It don’t last very long

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Litan Dey

Date: 6/26/2014 12:39:00 PM

Nice poem....congrats

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2014 5:07:00 AM

Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,

Paul Callus

Date: 6/25/2014 4:40:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Kiara! There you go...from fast to slow :) congrats on your win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2014 8:42:00 PM

KIARA.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:44:00 AM

your welcome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:18:00 AM

Kiara,, awesome haiku... Enjoyed the imagery..... Linda

Kiara Lebel
Date: 6/9/2014 9:27:00 AM

Thank you!