Breathtaking

Breathtaking
Kiara Lebel

Increasing heart rates start
Thoughts of long lasting life are wishes
It don’t last very long
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dey Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Nice poem....congrats
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 5:07 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
Callus Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:40 AM
Lovely haiku, Kiara! There you go...from fast to slow :) congrats on your win. // paul
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June 24, 2014 at 8:42 PM
KIARA.. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 9:44 AM
your welcome
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June 9, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Kiara,, awesome haiku... Enjoyed the imagery..... Linda
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June 9, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Thank you!
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