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Have you ever heard of the phrase "breathtaking?" Well, you took my breath away the first time I laid eyes on you. . . . And now . . . I can't breathe. We have sat and enjoyed the sky, the moon, and the stars We have even found an appreciation for the night's cool breeze As the clouds in the sky formed And the heavens opened up We have sat and enjoyed the lightning, the thunder, and the rain Will I . . . ever be the same. . . . 'Cause I can't breathe. . . . Ever since the first time we came... together. . . bodies clappin'. . . lips smackin'. . . muscles reactin'. . . To the rhythmic beat of our desires and passions. . . I can't stop askin'. . . Ever since I had this reaction to my attraction for you. . . Because you took my breath away the first time I laid eyes on you. . . And now . . . I can't breathe

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Date: 5/28/2011 6:34:00 PM
I like the flow and passion in this write, your words just forced my comp to have a smoke lol.... very nice poetry my friend...Michael
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:38:00 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Faizah. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:30:00 PM
Thanks for sharing. Welcome to PS.
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