Breathless

Thoughts, breathless,
disperse like clouds
in the day.
Interludes,
cut short in the wind,
gone
with the time.
Empty caves of remembrance,
torn in a starless sky,
the light of bygone days,
extinct.
Broken watch-glass,
torn off hands,
covered by the sand
of the past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 7:23 PM
Love it, Gert. Going bck in time with your poems again too! Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 9:56 AM
What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Gert. Love, Carol
Paul Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 4:07 AM
great job........
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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