Breathless

I seemed so lost,
In the darkest night.
But here you are,
My guiding light.

You lead me to,
A better place.
You put a smile,
Upon my face.

You take my breath,
Away my sweet.
And I will yours,
When we meet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 29, 2009 at 10:39 AM
well i see you are in a lovey mood! very good rhyme poem.
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