Breathless

Breathless as my heart denies a beat

Swept heavenly up off my feet

Breathless as you're eyes desire

To take the passion even higher

Breathless I will ever be

Whenever you take hold of me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Montgomery Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 9:16 AM
OMG all I can say is wow.... Im breathless!! lol..
Payne Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 8:40 AM
wow this leaves me breathless. This was so romantic and beautiful. Wonderful write, thanks for sharing it. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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