Breathless

Eyes, lashes, lips, what What flaming trap did you set My precious, Kismet English Haiku December 10, 2019

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/21/2019 9:58:00 AM

What a darling little gem, Panagiota.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/21/2019 10:41:00 AM

I like it too...thank you...Panagiota

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 12/10/2019 6:18:00 PM

Wow this is nice and sweet and short LOL! (THAT is why it's a Haiku) LOL! Wonderful write young lady...Write On.. James

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/10/2019 7:17:00 PM

James~ thank you, sweet poet. Love, love Kismet. Was a once in a lifetime and quite magical to this second. You also, p,ease, please write on! God love you, Panagiota

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/10/2019 2:59:00 PM

Beautiful pen. Well done.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/10/2019 4:01:00 PM

, ML....Thank you...I love this one...simple and powerful Panagiota

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/10/2019 1:01:00 PM

*Eyes, soft hands, and hips *Kisses that rain down so sweet *Nights, loving romantic trips *Beauty of Life, begs repeats *Verse, poem and great tips ............ Love your fine English Haiku...

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/10/2019 3:06:00 PM

Thank you. I can close my eyes and relive that daily. Better than Camelot! Panagiota's Kismet. I never lost that Kismetian moment, and I never will. Thank you Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/10/2019 12:18:00 PM

Kismet has never sounded so precious!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/10/2019 12:23:00 PM

Hi my friend! It was like Eternal Electric Kismet. Sounds Like a rock band!)))) Panagiota