Breathing Under Water

I'm drowning,
I'm breathing,
And still screaming.

I take a breath,
It's going black.
Is this death,
Or just an attack?

My heart is jumping,
Out of my chest.
Am I still breathing?
My body is in distress.

This is the end,
I can feel.
Help, please send.
Is this even real?

Are my eyes closing?
Is my heart still beating?
Am I dying,
Or am I dreaming?

*Written on June 7, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kinch  Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 2:01 AM
Great write, loved the last stanza.
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