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Breathing Under Water

I'm drowning, I'm breathing, And still screaming. I take a breath, It's going black. Is this death, Or just an attack? My heart is jumping, Out of my chest. Am I still breathing? My body is in distress. This is the end, I can feel. Help, please send. Is this even real? Are my eyes closing? Is my heart still beating? Am I dying, Or am I dreaming? *Written on June 7, 2017

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Date: 6/9/2017 2:01:00 AM
Great write, loved the last stanza.
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