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“While we breathe, we will hope.” – Barack Obama

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A Sam Scott poem:
29th October 2023
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Changed Past Contest
Sponsored by: Fire Bird
*WINNER* Placed 8th

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I want to hear you breathing Not just know that you're alive Proximity is vital For my beating heart to thrive The spoken words a niceness You won't hear me complain But the silence in-between them Life's invisible refrain I want to feel you breathing Just the warm breeze on my cheek As you lean across to whisper Something precious and unique I'll smile and nod agreement As your face it pulls away I know you cannot be here Yet I long for you to stay I want to see you breathing In the winter's Christmas light A gift that we've been given Amongst other gifts this night If only, in this season When the nights draw into black, All this distance in-between us Could draw breath to bring you back

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Date: 11/1/2023 6:50:00 AM
I feel the absence and longing for someone that means so much to your through these words, there is this song, i really love “ breathing” by lifehouse, not sure if you know the song, but i thought of that song when i read this. And i cant help but feel the emotions flowing in such eloquence! Very well read and delivered! I especially love the line “ All this distance in-between us Could draw breath to bring you back“ sigh if only… that feeling i know so very well! Congratulations on winning!
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Date: 11/1/2023 9:25:00 AM
You are too nice, really :) I do like the song actually, (reminds me a little of Third Day) - I wasn't aware I had won anything actually. lol [NtS: must pay more attention on PS]
Date: 11/1/2023 12:16:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thank you for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/1/2023 12:47:00 AM
Thank you Beata, bless you too :) We all have someone we miss and just imagine they were here. Blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs