Breathes of Evening

Color of life , O breath of evening! 
Thou are roving in the meadow;
Reddish reddish leaves are shivering:
Under mighty windy shadow

O the yard that dipped in showers! 
In the shades of hazy bowers;

Meadows thou art rustling, waving! 
With thy daisies, lilies
myrtles?,
Singing cuckoos in a craving:
While naughty wind there whistles;

Bubbles winking in the rivulet
Put they question, what is life? 
Hazy beeches  whispered murmured :
Life is nothing but strife;

Hearing it the bubbles vanished
Was it life that they cherished? 

It is evening, shadows listen! 
Night of life therest reaching 
All of us in dust of channels
Withering suffering, coming going
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Agustin Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Goff Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:16 AM
This sweet poem drifts over the readers life, Sabahat, love it! Original lines accentuate struggles we all abide, well done! jimbo
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