Breathe My Own

Drowning here,
drowning me,
are the emotions,
my heart won't free,
suffacating,
in this pool,
of endless chaos,
prove me a fool,
gasping for air,
I can see no light,
as I sink further,
I lose my fight,
dying here,
in this endless sea,
it's my own emotions,
that have drowned me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lucas Mcclure Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 2:09 PM
It was a pleasure to read your work! Lori
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