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Breathe Me In

Breathe me in. Help me to see all your love, plain as can be. It's right there but I'm too blind. I really do care. Show me how our love is intertwined. Guide me through the thick and the thin, Pull us together so that we can win. We could show the world that our love exists but first, help me, help me out of this lonely abyss. I want to escape with you. Breathe me in. Guide me through. We can win. I know it's true.

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Date: 3/26/2010 10:34:00 AM
was just thinking, this could be a beautiful song (: i love it
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Date: 12/15/2009 10:57:00 AM
your poetry really touches me.
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:37:00 AM
beautifully written my friend. I like the flow
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Date: 2/12/2009 8:21:00 AM
When there's the want, there's the way. That person just has to pull your already extended hand. This reads so beautifully, speaking fluidly and honestly of a shared love. Michael
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