Serenity D'Nae Montgomery Poet Rhyme

Breathe Me In

Breathe me in.
Help me to see
all your love,
plain as can be.
It's right there
but I'm too blind.
I really do care.
Show me how our love is intertwined.
Guide me through 
the thick and the thin,
Pull us together so 
that we can win.
We could show the world
that our love exists
but first,
help me,
help me out of this lonely abyss.
I want to escape with you.
Breathe me in.
Guide me through.
We can win.
I know it's true.

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Jay Loveless March 26, 2010 at 10:34 AM was just thinking, this could be a beautiful song (: i love it

Jay Loveless December 15, 2009 at 10:57 AM your poetry really touches me.

Belinda Parish February 12, 2009 at 9:37 AM beautifully written my friend. I like the flow

Michael Degenhardt February 12, 2009 at 8:21 AM When there's the want, there's the way. That person just has to pull your already extended hand. This reads so beautifully, speaking fluidly and honestly of a shared love. Michael