Breathe Me

out from under
from lovin you
free from your
overtaking embrace
still dreaming
falling from grace
always leaving
can you see
what i see
breathe me
take it in
never meeting
the end
never let you down
only say that
after i hit
the hard ground
let it be
breathe me
feel what i feel
the pain
unable to heal
it is a shame
how we let
this go on
so broken
so wrong
i have crossed
the line
to many times
find the key
breathe me
unlock all
the doors
that shut you out
set the spirts
FREE


breath me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strom Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Great poem, i love this one its very creative, Keep making great poems Autumm, you have a Beautiful name
Anish Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Sounds like yogic breathing! I like the way you use the phrase. Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 5:49 AM
Thank you for sharing this awesome piece with us today Autumn. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 6:04 PM
Good one Autumn, Sincerely, Love, Moses
Hilliker Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 5:27 PM
Nice poem. Thanks, Kim
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