Breathe For Them

Take a breath for those who can no longer breathe,
Their hopes, lives suffocated by unjust hate,
Take a breath for those whose human rights dwindled,
By crude ignorance, while the truth was stifled
Take a breath for those who look on in hunger,
while greed denies them their fair share with rancour,
Take a breath for those who watch in mute silence,
When they should speak to save, show their dissidence,
Take a breath for those who hold reigns of power
Yet lack the wisdom, equal rights to shower,
Take a breath for those who breathe not in freedom,
Food, water, air not for them in God’s Kingdom!
Take a breath for those who live in tyranny 
Take a breath, Take a breath, Take a breath,
Amen!

Second placement
“I can’t breathe “ contest
Sponsor Richard Lamoureux

Caren Krutsinger sponsored 
New form Poetry contest
Written 03/06/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:29 PM
Krish, you write with a great deal of empathy. You bring a great deal of community compassion to this write. I find it inspiring. The world needs this spirit of coming together. Thank you, and congrats on your win ~ John
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 12:17 AM
Dear John Thank you for your kind words. The world has to see a new order at least for the sake of future generations that are to follow us. We have to clear the ground For them, so they do not have to remedy the faults we have created. Much appreciate your valuable comments and wisdom.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:46 AM
You are welcome Krish, do drop by for a visit. Perhaps some of my writing will appeal to you. ;0)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:54 AM
This took my breath away. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Dear Richard Thanks for placing my poem on the winners list. We are all fighting an unseen virus and a well known human fault at the same time! Your contest has produced many great writes! Regards
Makama Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 11:53 PM
Thanks Funom! Let’s hope the world changes for the better!
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Amen! ~ Gershon
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Thanks my friend. Hope you are well.
A   Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 2:34 AM
Wow, this is strong. KRISH, thank you so much for voicing the truth. Linda
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 3:15 AM
Thanks Linda! Urgent repairs to be done. Pleased you like my write.
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 10:19 PM
I am with Andrea, amazing prayer, Krish.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 2:17 AM
Thanks Eve. Let’s speak up and help those who are suffering and desperately looking up to us for help.
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:12 PM
wow, what an amazing prayer!! I like how you made it so current with what has happened recently in the world.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 2:16 AM
Thanks Andrea! We are all united in this prayer. Let’s hope the world can see a new order emerge.
Rose  Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Let always take a breath for the sake of living loving and writing poetry . Thanks for sharing
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 2:22 AM
Yes, Pixie! Pixie we can breathe hope and life for others through our poetry!
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