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Breathe For Them

Take a breath for those who can no longer breathe, Their hopes, lives suffocated by unjust hate, Take a breath for those whose human rights dwindled, By crude ignorance, while the truth was stifled Take a breath for those who look on in hunger, while greed denies them their fair share with rancour, Take a breath for those who watch in mute silence, When they should speak to save, show their dissidence, Take a breath for those who hold reigns of power Yet lack the wisdom, equal rights to shower, Take a breath for those who breathe not in freedom, Food, water, air not for them in God’s Kingdom! Take a breath for those who live in tyranny Take a breath, Take a breath, Take a breath, Amen! Second placement “I can’t breathe “ contest Sponsor Richard Lamoureux Caren Krutsinger sponsored New form Poetry contest Written 03/06/2020

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Date: 6/15/2020 10:29:00 PM
Krish, you write with a great deal of empathy. You bring a great deal of community compassion to this write. I find it inspiring. The world needs this spirit of coming together. Thank you, and congrats on your win ~ John
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/16/2020 12:17:00 AM
Dear John Thank you for your kind words. The world has to see a new order at least for the sake of future generations that are to follow us. We have to clear the ground For them, so they do not have to remedy the faults we have created. Much appreciate your valuable comments and wisdom.
Date: 6/15/2020 7:46:00 AM
You are welcome Krish, do drop by for a visit. Perhaps some of my writing will appeal to you. ;0)
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Date: 6/14/2020 10:54:00 AM
This took my breath away. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/14/2020 12:04:00 PM
Dear Richard Thanks for placing my poem on the winners list. We are all fighting an unseen virus and a well known human fault at the same time! Your contest has produced many great writes! Regards
Date: 6/8/2020 9:13:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/8/2020 11:53:00 PM
Thanks Funom! Let’s hope the world changes for the better!
Date: 6/7/2020 12:32:00 PM
Amen! ~ Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/14/2020 1:13:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Hope you are well.
Date: 6/6/2020 2:34:00 AM
Wow, this is strong. KRISH, thank you so much for voicing the truth. Linda
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/6/2020 3:15:00 AM
Thanks Linda! Urgent repairs to be done. Pleased you like my write.
Date: 6/4/2020 10:19:00 PM
I am with Andrea, amazing prayer, Krish.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/5/2020 2:17:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Let’s speak up and help those who are suffering and desperately looking up to us for help.
Date: 6/4/2020 5:12:00 PM
wow, what an amazing prayer!! I like how you made it so current with what has happened recently in the world.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/5/2020 2:16:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! We are all united in this prayer. Let’s hope the world can see a new order emerge.
Date: 6/4/2020 2:49:00 PM
Let always take a breath for the sake of living loving and writing poetry . Thanks for sharing
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/5/2020 2:22:00 AM
Yes, Pixie! Pixie we can breathe hope and life for others through our poetry!

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