Breathe

Breathe

Can you hear me?
Do you see me?
I'm floating on the gentle breeze.
Slowing inhaling what is required to breathe.
Riding on the wind. 
It calls for your attention,
within its motion and mention. 
Within its time it will ever surely climb.
Breathing in this purity.
Soaking in its stillness.
Shaking off the tension.
It doesn't get any better than this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sergi Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:15 PM
a wonderful and relaxing work, enjoyed it very much Princess
Herring Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Thank you Joseph! That's so wonderful to hear.
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