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Breathe

When I breathe in I feel your life When I breathe out I feel the doubt Breathe in Breath out When I breathe in I see your face When I breathe out It’s somehow erased Breathe in Breathe out When I breathe in I hear your name When I breathe out You never came Breathe in Breathe out When I breathe in You warm my heart When I breathe out I know we’re apart Breathe in Breathe out When I breathe in You’re in my dreams When I breathe out You’re still gone, it seems Breathe in Breathe out Breathe out Breathe out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/10/2010 1:00:00 AM
Great kyrielle style here Jodie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:33:00 AM
A nice poem on yearning
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:07:00 AM
What an imaginative write, sort of took my breath away.
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