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Poet Carpe Diem

Breathe

Can't breathe life into 
   what's broken
Mend it first, then breathe


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MagiCicada13 Words To Live By Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy
Date:6/4/20

Copyright © Brenda Chiri | Year Posted 2019

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July 12, 2019 at 7:09 PM

as long as it doesnt take to long to fix you'll be fine lol I read this because I dont know what carpe diem is lol still dont lol

July 13, 2019 at 1:12 AM

Lmao you still don't know nick? Haha! It is like words to live by! Thank you muppet!;)

July 8, 2019 at 7:46 PM

Better let Puff Puff do it...your breath might be too powerful lol...none the less burn down the house sis...bro bro :o)

July 8, 2019 at 10:22 PM

Hahaha! Bro bro if we let little puff puff try to breathe life into something I'm afraid she would burn them up! Lol! You gave her that name for a reason brother! Lol! Remember the unicorns lol they were on fire all the time!;)

July 8, 2019 at 9:32 AM

Absolutely right, Brenda! Janice

July 8, 2019 at 3:48 PM

Thank you so much Janice! That's so sweet of you to say!()

Andrew Fairchild

July 8, 2019 at 12:22 AM

Good One! Really, very wise! I needed that thought. Thank you! :-)

July 8, 2019 at 2:26 AM

Lol so glad I could help you out my dear!;) thank you very much!;)

July 7, 2019 at 9:36 PM

Brenda. I like this poem. A breathe away is enough. -Richard

July 8, 2019 at 2:25 AM

Richard thank you I do appreciate your read and comment!;)

July 7, 2019 at 7:40 PM

Power within so few words. Nicely penned poem :) hugs

July 8, 2019 at 2:26 AM

Thank you Sandra I appreciate your comment!;)

David William Breidenthal

July 7, 2019 at 1:49 AM

This is a creative and brilliant poem. Very well-written. :) -JWE

July 8, 2019 at 2:25 AM

JW thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich

July 5, 2019 at 8:01 PM

I really like this, Brenda. powerful work!

July 5, 2019 at 8:43 PM

Thanks so much Andrea! Hope your 4th of July went well!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

July 5, 2019 at 10:29 AM

Good words Brenda, nicely put indeed!

July 5, 2019 at 10:39 AM

Gordon thank you very much your words are appreciated!;)

July 5, 2019 at 5:25 AM

Wise words Brenda...best wishes in the Contest..

July 5, 2019 at 10:39 AM

Thank you Joseph you are too kind!;) Are you entering too?

July 4, 2019 at 10:50 PM

Love the sentiment...strangely soothing. Lots of affection...as always of course. :) john

July 5, 2019 at 1:38 AM

Thank you Johnson much!as always your comments as much appreciated!;) All my affection! B

July 4, 2019 at 6:55 PM

Great point Brenda! Well done :)

July 4, 2019 at 7:54 PM

Thank you so much Heidi!;)

July 4, 2019 at 5:14 PM

Sage advice - words to live by. Boxes checked: G.L. in the contest, Brenda! :) gw

July 4, 2019 at 7:55 PM

Thank you so much Gershon! I will probably need it!;)

Richard Lamoureux

July 4, 2019 at 4:02 PM

You breathed life into this one. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.

July 4, 2019 at 7:55 PM

Thanks so much Rick!;)

July 4, 2019 at 3:40 PM

Words of wisdom...Well done...

July 4, 2019 at 3:44 PM

Thank you Arturo! I appreciate your comment and the read!;)

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