Breath of Love

I looked for a pen to write your name with but I couldn't find one
I felt pressured to run and tell of our little secret
I felt honored to be at your service
My breath of love
My breath of life

Tonight, let's make our secret known
Let's cough out the bad, to make room for the good
Let's make love up high, far away
Where only our breath of love breathes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Carey Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Sweet and Full of Promise! Xx
Hunjeri Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 9:21 PM
Thank you Ninette. I very much appreciate your visit to my poem
Lee Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 8:17 AM
I like "I felt pressured to run and tell of our little secret"
Lee Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Your welcome
Hunjeri Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Thank you!!
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