Breath of Love

The first time I saw you,
I saw a different hue
deep in your eyes;
they looked free from lies.
They also looked innocent,
making me to spend every cent
I had on the one who owned
such beautiful eyes to behold.

You are my breath of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Relish Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 6:39 AM
awesome pen... regards,nad!
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Nad! ^_^
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 2:48 AM
simply breathtaking Teddy - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Jan! ^_^
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