Breath of Love

I wander in the nature’s green, trees in rows the birds preen Like a gem glimmers the morning dew, with a precious diamond’s hue And flowers bloom as I gaze anew, eggs hatch to welcome lives in queue I can smell the wondrous earth, the distant flow of water in mirth It’s a new dawn another day thereof, wherein I sense his breath of love. As I prod on the old man smiles, he delivers milk by cycling miles Passing the farmers sweet abode, the cry of new life reaches the road A child wails by the neighbour’s door, with a sweet candy her eyes adore Roaming the street is a hound grown, pups trailing behind unknown A jocund street undreamed of, wherein I sense his breath of love. My dearest rush out sighting me afar, without whom my life is a war The tiny tots in their cradles lie, as we sing a lullaby This is the world I am part of, wherein I sense his breath of love. © (4 Feb '15) * Honourable mention in the contest 'Enter a poem #1' by Poet Destroyer
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Haight Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Poesy, congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 5:45 PM
such a beautiful flow to your words Nadiya congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:40 PM
POSEY, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
A   Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:49 PM
POESY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 5:02 AM
- Wooow, this is really beautiful, glad I found exactly this today !!! (7) - I wish you a beautiful day, Nadiya - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 17, 2015 at 10:22 AM
Wow. I couldn't resist rereading this piece--so inky! Love it
Relish Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Thank you Sarpong for the visit and comment.. nad
Mcdaid Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:15 AM
a delightful piece nadyia when love and nature flow through the pen golden inked piece wishing you a blessed sunday
Relish Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 5:07 AM
Thank you Liam...your comments are always encouraging... have a great weekend... lov, nad!
Staton Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:01 PM
I love this poem! It has a nice flow and beautiful imagery!
Relish Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Thank you for stoppkng by valerie... pleased that you like my pen
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:20 AM
:) beautiful NAdiya.. :) Love it.. :)! sure GAil will love this.. :)thanks for visiting my poems.. :)
Relish Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Thank you Olive for your visit and lovely words... nad!
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 11:29 AM
I agree with Jack. Nad has great talent. Her poetic career is very bright. Any reader of this poem "Breath of love" will say yes to my statement. It is undoubtedly a major poem. Work of a skilled artist. God bless this poet. Good luck Nad.
Relish Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Thank you Rajat... not sure if i am worthy of your praise... i am really happy friend... be blessed... nad!
Ellison Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Wonderful my dear Nadiya! I have discovered a new talent... let's not loose track of each other! Love and huggs, Jack XOX
Relish Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Thank you jack... i am definitely going to read your poems... lov, nad!
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 3:04 AM
A wonderful poem Nad. You are a gem my lovely friend.One of the best poems I have read so far. Must be the topper.My fav.God bless, Nad>rajat
Relish Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 4:06 AM
I am really pleased that you like it Rajat... be blessed... nads!
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