Breath of Angels-Haiku

the breath of angels

drifting through departing clouds

awareness of awe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ramsdale Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 10:35 AM
I love your perfection! You have a talent my friend...CR
Hilliker Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Nice Haiku. Congrats on your win.
Anderson Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Hey Margaret, Very nice 5th Place! Your comments mean a lot to me..Sorry it takes me a while to leave comments...Thanks always..hugs, Jimmy
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May 9, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Great beauty in your words and a very well deserve win my friend in the contest. Congrats. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra...Margaret Foster
Dufresne Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 9:37 PM
puts one in a contemplative spirit, doesn't it? Nice Haiku -Robert
Lopez Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 6:53 PM
that fist line is killer...... great job with this haiku!!!!!
Devonshire Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Congrats on your win, Margaret!
Winter Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 5:52 AM
So very beautiful! Congrats on your well deserved win and kindest thanks for your thoughtful congrats too. love, shar
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Beautifully won, Margaret!
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May 5, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on placing fifth in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. wonderful words depict the photo perfectly..enjoy my friend this great win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Moreno Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Margaret, congratulations on your success in my Summer Tempest contest...Raul
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May 5, 2010 at 8:40 AM
What an uplifting perspective in the poem. Nice use of alliteration. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Best entry I've read so far for this contest, Margaret. I like the spiritual perspective. Truly Brilliant! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
Milgate Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 8:36 PM
What a nice image, and soft sound like an angel's breath I think! Thanks Think we need a spiritual category
Flach Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:43 PM
Nicely done - I, too am in awe - of the poetry.
Richards Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 7:22 PM
A breath of angels.....gives such a serene and sense of peace to the photograph! Nicely written, Margaret. ~ Carrie
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