Breath

Your breath is in my ear
Transcending all, that I know
Heaven’s treasures, now you show
And everything is clear

Wanting not, no envy
As here we lay satisfied
Our dreaming time comes alive
Breathing we so gently

We exist in the sky
Snuggling souls, caressing
Beaming hearts that thrill and sing
Grace that’s blessing, you and I

Gentle breath, almost here
How I long to touch your skin
Feel you’re beating heart within
And whisper ‘You’re my dear’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 7:04 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here David. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 28, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Congrats David my friend on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all with luv this happy Sunday ..
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November 25, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Subtle and sensual in a sweet way David.. so happy to hear u are back on the road ...again.. to leaving the past in the Past...luv.. go forward .. like this beautiful poem ... enjoy a H.T. Day luv..
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November 24, 2010 at 7:02 PM
This is a beautiful description of true love, David. Actually, it's the antithesis of my poem on which you commented tonight. If only we could always stay in the state of bliss you describe! Love, Carolyn
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November 24, 2010 at 2:55 AM
Ow,so very romantic!
M V Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 7:44 PM
very powerful profound thoughts,David.Ienjoyed it
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