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Breath

Your breath is in my ear Transcending all, that I know Heaven’s treasures, now you show And everything is clear Wanting not, no envy As here we lay satisfied Our dreaming time comes alive Breathing we so gently We exist in the sky Snuggling souls, caressing Beaming hearts that thrill and sing Grace that’s blessing, you and I Gentle breath, almost here How I long to touch your skin Feel you’re beating heart within And whisper ‘You’re my dear’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 7:04:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here David. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:22:00 PM
Congrats David my friend on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all with luv this happy Sunday ..
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Date: 11/25/2010 7:57:00 AM
Subtle and sensual in a sweet way David.. so happy to hear u are back on the road ...again.. to leaving the past in the Past...luv.. go forward .. like this beautiful poem ... enjoy a H.T. Day luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:02:00 PM
This is a beautiful description of true love, David. Actually, it's the antithesis of my poem on which you commented tonight. If only we could always stay in the state of bliss you describe! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:55:00 AM
Ow,so very romantic!
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Date: 11/23/2010 7:44:00 PM
very powerful profound thoughts,David.Ienjoyed it
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