Breath

The prettiest sound
The scariest moment
My baby boy’s first cry

By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 20, 2010 at 9:07 PM
beautifully expressed in this senryu,,and Thank you for taking the time to read my words and comment upon them as well,,,Welcome to the world of Poetrysoup,,,Blessings..Cecil
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