Breakup Letter

Dear Prince Charming, The one who was really heart warming This is a letter to inform you that we are breaking up As you are always away, I feel compelled to take this step! You have had me really fooled After a chat with you, my temper was never cooled Always were you the one with the male ego Really, how could you believe I would be, like the pink flamingo Always keeping mum, Always keeping dumb Behaving as the ancient girlfriend, the one with the do already in the tomb!

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Sara Chansarkar

Date: 6/16/2016 10:07:00 AM

Loved this one,thanks Anoucheka!

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 6:06:00 PM

Anoucheka,, :) , Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 2:22:00 PM

thank you for the reply. no worries about the rules... Linda

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations, Anoucheka on a well-deserved win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Anoucheka

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/19/2014 7:31:00 AM

Thks so much Dr Mehta

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 1:15:00 AM

Anoucheka,.. , you did not follow the rules, however, I enjoyed your poem, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/19/2014 7:31:00 AM

Thks so much for the placement, :) really sorry about the rules, guess i skimmed through the contest details real fast!! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2014 1:25:00 AM

Nice take on the theme of break up, good luck, Anoucheka