Breakup Letter

Dear Prince Charming,
The one who was really heart warming
This is a letter to inform you that we are breaking up
As you are always away, I feel compelled to take this step!

You have had me really fooled
After a chat with you, my temper was never cooled
Always were you the one with the male ego
Really, how could you believe I would be, like the pink flamingo

Always keeping mum, Always keeping dumb
Behaving as the ancient girlfriend, the one with the do already in the tomb!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/16/2016 10:07:00 AM
Loved this one,thanks Anoucheka!
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Date: 6/20/2014 6:06:00 PM
Anoucheka,, :) , Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2014 2:22:00 PM
thank you for the reply. no worries about the rules... Linda
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Date: 6/19/2014 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations, Anoucheka on a well-deserved win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.
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Date: 6/19/2014 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Anoucheka
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/19/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thks so much Dr Mehta
Date: 6/19/2014 1:15:00 AM
Anoucheka,.. , you did not follow the rules, however, I enjoyed your poem, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 6/19/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thks so much for the placement, :) really sorry about the rules, guess i skimmed through the contest details real fast!! :)
Date: 6/12/2014 1:25:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of break up, good luck, Anoucheka
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