Breakup Letter

Dear Prince Charming,
The one who was really heart warming
This is a letter to inform you that we are breaking up
As you are always away, I feel compelled to take this step!

You have had me really fooled
After a chat with you, my temper was never cooled
Always were you the one with the male ego
Really, how could you believe I would be, like the pink flamingo

Always keeping mum, Always keeping dumb
Behaving as the ancient girlfriend, the one with the do already in the tomb!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chansarkar Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Loved this one,thanks Anoucheka!
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June 20, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Anoucheka,, :) , Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT
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June 19, 2014 at 2:22 PM
thank you for the reply. no worries about the rules... Linda
Sietesantos Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations, Anoucheka on a well-deserved win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Anoucheka
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Thks so much Dr Mehta
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June 19, 2014 at 1:15 AM
Anoucheka,.. , you did not follow the rules, however, I enjoyed your poem, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Thks so much for the placement, :) really sorry about the rules, guess i skimmed through the contest details real fast!! :)
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 1:25 AM
Nice take on the theme of break up, good luck, Anoucheka
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