Breakthrough Genesis

A Dark Streak paints Indigo Perpetual bliss With an omniscient soul feeling That a breakthrough is coming to your subsequent life Emerging with shrew to face the challenges that beckon you to come out from comfort zone Example For Heart Symphony Poetry Contest 2-21-2016 Words used: soul, indigo, azure, perpetual, omniscient

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 2/23/2016 1:04:00 PM

A lighted street in which smiling you stay in no moment amber like waving your delicate hand that wrote about the love and hope on the twirling papers flying under the sad blow of the wind like a renewed Symphony of Hope waiting to be written.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/23/2016 1:33:00 PM

Thank you for great feedback Ovidiu

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2016 4:43:00 AM

- Well done Nayda ! - A great poem :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/22/2016 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise