Breakthrough

Words are sharp
Swords that hurt.

Loyalty ends
When disrespect begins.

History claims
Fans follow talents.

It's better to break
Than destroy the marriage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 5:13 PM
Hello Hugo, When a marriage breaks one person is always hurting. Much love here. /Darlene/
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January 5, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Hello Hugo, Oh I agree. Yet if separated for a time, would the love between the couple grow stronger? Could that happen? Yes I think in time my husband probably want a divorce. yet he was sick. he had too many health problems. He passed in 2016th Love you more /Darlene/ /
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 3:24 AM
In legal parlance, it's better to get a divorce than to destroy the marriage. Separation really is a physical and emotional torture for both parties. When two parties don't have the same direction, it part ways. Either one low down humility or agrees term with the other to let marriage save or fight to legal means. Yours has divorce mine has not. It's hard for us and lucky for yours. Love you here, Darlene./Hugo.
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