Breakthrough

roaming without aim
     early man hits on a cave
       his niche ~ our future 


By 
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Creative way to go with this one. I am glad that they survived like they did. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Thanks Sara, I popped in on my rounds; hand to mouth existence for these early humanoids, but they came through somehow, cheers David
Flaherty Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Aimless but yes indeed happy in his niche. Happy to hunt and with a cave fir a dwelling. Progress ??? Sometimes more destructive than fulfilling
Flaherty Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Never a truer word or thought said or comment wrote
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Perfect description Christopher, in the end fulfillment is what counts, to me anyway, we’re here at this point in time now, we did not choose to be, we did not have any say in the matter, cheers David
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