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Breakthrough

roaming without aim
     early man hits on a cave
       his niche ~ our future 


By 
David Kavanagh

allusionhumanitylifesuccesshaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2021 3:06:00 PM

Creative way to go with this one. I am glad that they survived like they did. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/1/2021 3:13:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I popped in on my rounds; hand to mouth existence for these early humanoids, but they came through somehow, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/1/2021 12:04:00 PM

Aimless but yes indeed happy in his niche. Happy to hunt and with a cave fir a dwelling. Progress ??? Sometimes more destructive than fulfilling

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/3/2021 1:10:00 PM

Never a truer word or thought said or comment wrote

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/1/2021 1:11:00 PM

Perfect description Christopher, in the end fulfillment is what counts, to me anyway, we’re here at this point in time now, we did not choose to be, we did not have any say in the matter, cheers David

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