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Breakthrough

thrashing cold water a fish leaps... embraced by the sun

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Date: 12/11/2022 2:34:00 PM

Wonderful that the fish gets a slight glimpse of the sun and its warmth. Congratulations on it being a winner. Thanks for sharing. Sara

P.M. Richter
Date: 12/30/2022 10:19:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate your insightful comment. A life changing perspective for this little fish. Thank you Sara!

Date: 1/8/2020 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!;)

P.M. Richter
Date: 1/9/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Brenda :)

Date: 10/24/2019 9:19:00 PM

This one made me cold and startled simultaneously - that fish startled me, appropriately so! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/24/2019 11:29:00 PM

Thanks CayCay!!!

Date: 10/22/2019 5:44:00 PM

this is REAlLY nice. What a great image, PM

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/22/2019 9:40:00 PM

You are very kind ~ thanks Andrea :)

Date: 10/20/2019 11:51:00 PM

Stunning 3 lines dear P.M.

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/21/2019 1:04:00 PM

Thank you Pixie!

Date: 10/20/2019 11:44:00 AM

Beautifully penned and a new "fav" of mine.

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/20/2019 1:24:00 PM

You just made my day ~ thanks M.L.

Date: 10/9/2019 6:20:00 AM

So true--great image you captured, P.M.

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/9/2019 9:47:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Date: 10/6/2019 11:33:00 AM

This is a great Haiku! Well done :)

P.M. Richter
Date: 10/6/2019 11:10:00 PM

Thanks Heidi!