Breakthrough

splashing cold water
fish leap 
embraced in the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Wonderful that the fish gets a slight glimpse of the sun and its warmth. Congratulations on it being a winner. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Marc Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 10:19 AM
I sincerely appreciate your insightful comment. A life changing perspective for this little fish. Thank you Sara!
Chiri Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
Marc Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Thank you Brenda :)
Godwin Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:19 PM
This one made me cold and startled simultaneously - that fish startled me, appropriately so! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Marc Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Thanks CayCay!!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:44 PM
this is REAlLY nice. What a great image, PM
Marc Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:40 PM
You are very kind ~ thanks Andrea :)
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 11:51 PM
Stunning 3 lines dear P.M.
Marc Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Thank you Pixie!
Kiser Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Beautifully penned and a new "fav" of mine.
Marc Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 1:24 PM
You just made my day ~ thanks M.L.
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 6:20 AM
So true--great image you captured, P.M.
Marc Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:33 AM
This is a great Haiku! Well done :)
Marc Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Thanks Heidi!
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