Breaking Waves

strong base ..yet so weak 

shallow water .. i now break 

no longer a wave 


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you can walk up straight , on the inside we all the same ... vulnerable 
a wave can break just in a few seconds .. just like your heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 4:57 PM
YEP,GOOD MESSAGE..We are all the same at Heart and Soul,as fragile as a fine bone China,teapot:) Charma
Moreno Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 1:24 PM
Vulnerability is a fast way to getting one's heart broken...Raul
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