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Breaking Up With Pd

The time has come my dear for us to part It was not my intention to hurt your heart Our goals and views are just to diverse I scratch the surface but you totally immerse So many people love you, I feel I can't compete You'll always be the driver and I in the back seat Abundance of comments and praise for you awaits While I wither in the shadows your limelight creates I promise to protect you from crazy saboteurs Please remember my heart remains with yours 06/13/2014 ~For PD's contest~

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Painted Hunter

Date: 7/29/2014 2:36:00 PM

There's plenty of PD's in the sea....well, maybe not...;)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/8/2014 2:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the win. Breaking up is hard to do, but you did it your way, very nicely. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/27/2014 9:29:00 PM

Nicely said Cecilia and congratulations on winning in the contest. Verlena

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/21/2014 6:23:00 PM

Breaking up is hard to do and all the reasons are make me blue but your heart is soft and I sense a peace in your words. Such a gentle soul you are! Love, Lizzy

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/21/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Lizzy.Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2014 11:52:00 PM

Thank you for the reply...PD

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 6:02:00 PM

Cecilia, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/21/2014 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Skat ....hugs

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/20/2014 6:58:00 AM

Great break up poem, so sweet and kind. grats :)

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/21/2014 7:01:00 PM

Thank you Casarah.....hugs

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/20/2014 6:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win !!!! Enjoyed reading it!!!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/20/2014 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Robert, happy you enjoyed : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2014 11:36:00 PM

I have no idea where you placed on the list, but I see you got congrats and I sure hope you placed high sweetie. BIG congrats to you.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/20/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I placed in 4th place : )

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/19/2014 10:40:00 PM

You can break up with me anytime. You are the sweetest breaker upper ever. :):):)

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/20/2014 8:21:00 AM

Your comment make me laugh, thanks Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2014 10:23:00 AM

Dear Cecilia, Don't sell yourself short. You deserve praise as well! I think PD will like this tribute as it describes her so well. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/19/2014 6:34:00 PM

I'm not, I laughed writing this for I don't feel that way, just wanted to make a definite contrast between poets, all in good fun Thanks for your comment. Hugs

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2014 9:11:00 AM

What a sweet write...congrats on your win Cecilia

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/19/2014 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Joseph

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations, Cecilia, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/19/2014 6:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Pandita for your kind comment, glad you enjoyed.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Cecilia

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/19/2014 6:19:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 1:08:00 AM

hi Cecilia, this was very sweet, --heartfelt for a break-up note.... Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/19/2014 6:18:00 PM

Thanks Linda, it was a fun one to write. I got your back : ) .......hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2014 3:36:00 PM

gosh, you did yours so dang SWEET. Makes me look like a big fat meanie. hahaha. This is wonderful and I bet she places it HIGH.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/19/2014 6:16:00 PM

Thanks Andrea ...your comment made me LOL, you are definitely not a meanie.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/17/2014 11:48:00 PM

interesting write for pd'd contest. keep on truckin! jsl

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/18/2014 8:27:00 AM

Thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2014 7:49:00 AM

I like what you have done here, I will have to check out the contest. How have you been? This shows you take a back seat to no one!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/18/2014 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Richard

John Lawless

Date: 6/14/2014 5:14:00 PM

Very nice Cecilia, PD casts a long shadow but it increases the light. Great entry, good luck.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/14/2014 7:00:00 PM

Thank you John

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2014 2:12:00 PM

- Cecilia, a very well written poem for this contest! - (Do not stand in the shadows, "the sun" shines for everyone :) - Good luck in the contest - Wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/14/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise. Have a great weekend as well : ) Hugs