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Breaking Up

She said our love was through, And added, going in for the kill, ‘I’m sorry, I don’t love you; I never have and never will - This relationship gives me no thrill.’ I said, ‘I wish you’d stay.’ I’d thought our love would always be - But then I turned and walked away: Without her there to nag me, There’d be no fights and I was free… Happy Heart, 2nd June, for Francine’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/4/2012 9:10:00 PM
well, I can't look at your limericks, so I guess I have nothing I can see of yours today, Jack. Thanks for your comments, my friend!
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:12:00 PM
....as you said " There'd be no fights and I was free...." we all need freedom to love and freedom to be who we are,all alone, love you're poem ,just love it,it is so refreshing and pure,Ivy
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:03:00 PM
hahaha, the "gentleman" walking away trying to suppress a grin. LOVE IT.
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Date: 6/2/2012 11:19:00 AM
Good one! Tanya
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
Excellent write my friend! Your rhyme and flow is extremely remarkable! The line, "I'm sorry, I don't love you;" is an incredible line, and heartfelt! I really love your supremely excellent poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/2/2012 9:22:00 AM
sometimes we hold onto ppl for the companionship or to feel a little bit loved or special. then you realize how special you were all along <3
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