Breaking Up

a spring break-up
the ice laments its lover
                           …thunder on the pond

John G. Lawless
©3/8/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:48 PM
Fantastic images contained in just 17 syllables, John. A keeper! ~ Gershon
Scorpio Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Yummy breakups after Valentine's Day LOL ice outs on the lakes before the end of March makes me swoon :) loved A.S.
Willason Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Thought provoking, mind off in tangents, does the ice melt into its lover ? Do like this one and where it takes the imagination. Paul
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