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Breaking Up

a spring break-up the ice laments its lover …thunder on the pond John G. Lawless ©3/8/2023

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Date: 3/8/2023 7:48:00 PM
Fantastic images contained in just 17 syllables, John. A keeper! ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/8/2023 7:14:00 PM
Yummy breakups after Valentine's Day LOL ice outs on the lakes before the end of March makes me swoon :) loved A.S.
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Date: 3/8/2023 1:49:00 PM
Thought provoking, mind off in tangents, does the ice melt into its lover ? Do like this one and where it takes the imagination. Paul
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