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I had a heartbreak
probably you thinking to 
yourself
that my heart was broken but 
no...

My heart took a break
It took a break from loving you
from believing that there could
actually be truth in the 
statements 
you make whe your eyes get 
smaller
and emotions take over your 
thinking

It took a break from
from breathing the same air as 
you
believing love dwells in you
or that the truth can ever come 
from you

My heart has given up on you.
I had a heart break!

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Date: 12/14/2016 6:40:00 AM
I absolutely love this. Great job!
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Date: 9/2/2014 8:36:00 AM
you are welcome Yolanda.....Linda
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:17:00 PM
Hi Yolanda, beautifully done. Big up yo!
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:47:00 PM
Yolanda, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 6/1/2014 5:57:00 AM
Hey this is a good site, just had to register. Posted a poem on my account, check it out
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Date: 5/31/2014 6:51:00 PM
A wonderful poem i relate to so well Yolanda, im taking a break as well. Welcome to the soup Blessings Carl
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Yolanda Nyembezi
Date: 8/11/2014 3:17:00 AM
Thank You sir
Date: 5/31/2014 8:00:00 AM
Yolanda, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Yolanda Nyembezi
Date: 8/11/2014 3:17:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 5/31/2014 6:03:00 AM
lovely lyrics but so sad. You need to correct 'when your' in verse 2 hugs jan xxxx
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Yolanda Nyembezi
Date: 8/11/2014 3:18:00 AM
I did. Thank you.
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