James Foulk Poet Rhyme

Breaking Hearts

My heart would break today,
just like a piece of clay,
if my dear, you walked away.

Breaking hearts is what you do so well,
but your days with me are over my Raquel,
I should have known, that you were a Jezebel.

wrote 8-8-08  Purely Fiction

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Laura Mckenzie August 10, 2008 at 6:49 PM I love the flow in your fictional piece here! Laura :)

Cecil Hickman August 9, 2008 at 9:21 PM truly a sad write, love lost in any manner is truly a sad happening,,,and Thank you for commenting as well as the mention of the mispelled word in my title,,blessings..Cecil

Verlecia Fields August 9, 2008 at 4:54 AM bring up sadness~ of days past~

Daver Austin August 9, 2008 at 4:19 AM Wow! You are prolific. I hope this jezebel was good ridance. Good write. Love, Daver

Carrie Richards August 8, 2008 at 6:46 PM Reminds me of the old Bette Davis movie! Goodness, she loved them and left them....But she redeemed herself at the end. .....Good thoughts! Carrie