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Breaking Hearts

My heart would break today, just like a piece of clay, if my dear, you walked away. Breaking hearts is what you do so well, but your days with me are over my Raquel, I should have known, that you were a Jezebel. wrote 8-8-08 Purely Fiction

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Date: 8/10/2008 6:49:00 PM
I love the flow in your fictional piece here! Laura :)
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Date: 8/9/2008 9:21:00 PM
truly a sad write, love lost in any manner is truly a sad happening,,,and Thank you for commenting as well as the mention of the mispelled word in my title,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 8/9/2008 4:54:00 AM
bring up sadness~ of days past~
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Date: 8/9/2008 4:19:00 AM
Wow! You are prolific. I hope this jezebel was good ridance. Good write. Love, Daver
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Date: 8/8/2008 6:46:00 PM
Reminds me of the old Bette Davis movie! Goodness, she loved them and left them....But she redeemed herself at the end. .....Good thoughts! Carrie
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